10 Minute Wonder...

Today I saw the latest cut of the film and it was 10 minutes long, slightly lengthy for a 3 minute wonder I think. I was able to give Tasha quite a few suggestions. The Tregothnan bits did not work in practise, they didn't make sense split up and the piece didn't flow. So I decided to try out putting it all at the end before the Charlottes Tea House ending and shortening it, this worked a lot better. I think both myself and Tasha felt a lot better after my visit, I felt relieved that it seemed to be working as a film and I think Tasha was glad that I found a solution to the flow problem. I'm going to go over again tomorrow and we WILL have it at 3 minutes by the time I leave. That way we can give it to Jamie to start laying the audio down.